Didn’t get a chance to comment on this when I was running through all the stories for Top in Fiction, Ryan, but I thought your story was fantastic. Drew me in straight and I loved the ambiguity of the ending without any easy answers. Brilliantly done 👍🏼
I love how many questions this piece forced me to ask. I was blown away by some of the imagery and wording. The dark undercurrents kept me going. I’d love to read more by you!
You had me hooked from the start. For a while I thought Ester is a daughter, not that it made it any easier when I realised she was his wife. Loved their vernacular, too, masterfully done!
Didn’t get a chance to comment on this when I was running through all the stories for Top in Fiction, Ryan, but I thought your story was fantastic. Drew me in straight and I loved the ambiguity of the ending without any easy answers. Brilliantly done 👍🏼
Appreciate you taking the time to read it. I was really proud of how this one turned out and I’m grateful you that you chose it.
That old couple were adorable.
I love how many questions this piece forced me to ask. I was blown away by some of the imagery and wording. The dark undercurrents kept me going. I’d love to read more by you!
Enjoyed reading this- smart title! Got emotional learning about Arnie looking for Ronnie every night in the junkyard. Great story.
You had me hooked from the start. For a while I thought Ester is a daughter, not that it made it any easier when I realised she was his wife. Loved their vernacular, too, masterfully done!
Very well done! I liked the flow of the conversations between the characters.
This feels like part one of something... interesting!